Thursday, 19 January 2012

Haiku


Fish in the sea



A bright sunny day
The fish swimming together
From the hungry shark

The shark get’s closer
The predator seeks his prey
The fish have no choice

He jumps too early
His prey swims with no urgence
He can not catch them

Title: Fish in the sea
Style: Haiku
Inspiration: The sea

3 comments:

  1. I really like the way you worded it. It has a certain metaphor to it as well :)

    -Helena

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  2. I like how all of your Haiku's fit well together.

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  3. i like how the shark is about to eat the fish then they get away and it changes quickly good job

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