Model Poem
Original: Passing On, Udiah (witness to Yah)
12 cor 5:8, Eccl 12:7
To be absent from the body
Is to be present with the Lord
The dust returns to earth
The spirit returns to God who gave it
My Poem: A Chance
To be given a body
Is a gift from the Lord
To be given a Chance on earth
Have faith in the Lord who gave it
Title: A Chance
Style: Model Poem
Inspiration: I saw the poem and I thought I would be able to Change some words to make it completely different.
I like how you changed the poem. I like yours better than the original.
ReplyDelete-Emily